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Writing the Uncanny
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Comedy as Uncanny Mechanism

Writing the Uncanny Dan Coxon and Richard V. Hirst (eds.)
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Key Principle

Comedy and the uncanny share a structural mechanism: both subvert the familiar. But the deeper connection is deception. Comedy is "the most deceitful form of writing. The promise that what you're offering is going to be fun and reassuring, when by its own nature it can't be" (Shearman, "Finding the Comedy in the Blatantly Unfunny"). The comedian must stay ahead of the audience, pretending inclusion while structurally requiring the audience to lag behind. This gap between apparent warmth and actual control is the same gap that produces uncanny dread.

The critical distinction is consequence. Comedy that resets -- that undoes its damage, explains its villain, restores normalcy -- is safe and forgettable. Comedy that refuses to reset becomes uncanny. The damage persists. The laughter curdles. Comedy's communal effect, in this mode, is not unifying but exclusionary -- it separates those who get the joke from those who don't, and the most unsettling comedy occurs when the comedian "isn't necessarily on your side."

Why This Matters

Most writers treat comedy and the uncanny as opposing modes: one lightens, the other darkens. Shearman argues they are the same mechanism pointed in different directions. Understanding this unlocks several craft possibilities:

  • Tonal instability as a tool. Comedy lowers the reader's guard, making the uncanny strike harder when it arrives. But this only works if the comedy itself carries real weight -- if it refuses to be merely decorative.
  • Consequence over resolution. The uncanny requires that damage persist. Comedy that refuses the reset button ("if any of you were wondering whether Mrs Winter is quite all right again now, the answer is No. And she never will be" -- Shearman quoting Dahl's technique) achieves this naturally.
  • The short story as ideal form. Both jokes and uncanny fiction depend on compression, refusal of resolution, and sustained intensity. The short story mirrors both: "The short story gains its power, and narrative momentum, from its callous abandonment of characters in times of need" (Shearman, "Finding the Comedy in the Blatantly Unfunny").

Good Examples

  • Dahl's "Pig": "An entirely fearless piece of writing, in which the comedian laughs at the audience rather than the other way around" (Shearman, "Finding the Comedy in the Blatantly Unfunny"). The comedian is not on your side. The joke is at the reader's expense.
  • Dahl's signature move -- the capital-N "No": The narrator draws a veil over the horror (negative space), forces the reader to imagine it, then judges the reader for not having cared enough to ask. Comedy becomes accusation.
  • Du Maurier's "The Blue Lenses": Animal heads progress from benign to threatening (traditional joke structure). The false reset -- lenses removed, normalcy restored -- is then shattered when Marda sees her own head changed to a doe's, "wary before sacrifice... meek, already bowed" (Shearman, "Finding the Comedy in the Blatantly Unfunny"). She has chosen ignorance. The reader, who laughed throughout, is culpable.
  • Burton's Wonka vs. Dahl's Wonka: "As soon as Wonka is understood he can be redeemed, and as soon as he can be redeemed he is no longer funny" (Shearman, "Finding the Comedy in the Blatantly Unfunny"). Explanation destroys the uncanny. The film presses the reset button that Dahl refused.

Counterpoints

  • Comedy-as-empathy tradition: The tragicomic sensibility (Chaplin, Benigni) uses humor to enlarge compassion -- comedy in service of connection rather than exclusion. Shearman's model is specifically about comedy as weapon, not all comedy. The two modes can coexist in a single work, but the uncanny emerges only from the exclusionary register.
  • Novels can sustain comedy-uncanny fusion: Shearman claims rage and compression suit the short story ("Rage rarely sustains itself over the length of a novel" -- Shearman, "Finding the Comedy in the Blatantly Unfunny"), but novelists like Shirley Jackson (We Have Always Lived in the Castle) sustain comedic unease across long forms. The principle may be about density of consequence rather than strict length.
  • Reset can itself be uncanny: A false reset (as in du Maurier) is technically a reset that fails -- the uncanny emerges precisely because the reader believed normalcy was restored. The mechanism depends on the reader wanting the reset. This suggests the reader's desire for safety is itself raw material.
  • Dispassion vs. fury: Shearman notes two distinct paths to the same effect. Dahl achieves comedy-uncanny fusion through cold dispassion; du Maurier achieves it through fury. The mechanism is shared but the emotional register of the author need not be.

Key Quotes

  • "It is the most deceitful form of writing. The promise that what you're offering is going to be fun and reassuring, when by its own nature it can't be." -- Shearman, "Finding the Comedy in the Blatantly Unfunny"
  • "As soon as Wonka is understood he can be redeemed, and as soon as he can be redeemed he is no longer funny." -- Shearman, "Finding the Comedy in the Blatantly Unfunny"
  • "It is entirely this paranoia that you must use to your advantage." -- Shearman, "Finding the Comedy in the Blatantly Unfunny," on comedy's exclusionary structure
  • "The best short stories aren't necessarily much interested in reason. Why should they have to be reasonable? They don't want to form a lasting relationship with you. They are dirty, passionate, one-night stands." -- Shearman, "Finding the Comedy in the Blatantly Unfunny"
  • "Put something familiar under the magnifying glass and see it as something new and unrecognisable. And then turn up the resolution, tighter, and tighter still -- until, at last, the lens cracks." -- Shearman, "Finding the Comedy in the Blatantly Unfunny"
  • "Read 'The Blue Lenses'. Listen to her scream." -- Shearman, "Finding the Comedy in the Blatantly Unfunny"

Rules of Thumb

  1. Comedy without consequence is not uncanny. If the damage resets, the reader is safe. If the reader is safe, there is no uncanny. Refuse the reset button.
  2. The comedian should not be on the reader's side. The most unsettling comedy occurs when the joke-teller is angry, judging, or indifferent to the audience's comfort. Laughter becomes complicity.
  3. Use comedy to lower defenses, then refuse to raise them again. The comedic setup creates expectation of safety. Betraying that expectation -- permanently -- is where the uncanny enters.
  4. Compression serves both comedy and the uncanny. Every detail in a short story carries disproportionate weight: "Every hanging thread of conversation, every cough or pause or sip of tea -- there has to be a reason the writer bothered to include them" (Shearman). Use this pressure.
  5. Withhold the explanation. Comedy that explains itself (why the villain is the way he is, what the horror actually was) converts the uncanny into something solvable. The uncanny must not be solvable.
  6. False resets are more powerful than no reset. Du Maurier's "The Blue Lenses" shows that letting the reader believe normalcy has returned -- then shattering it -- implicates the reader in wanting the comfortable lie.
  7. Rage belongs in short fiction. Sustained anger becomes didactic over novel length. The short story can sustain fury without needing to justify or moderate it -- "They don't want to form a lasting relationship with you" (Shearman).

Related References

  • negative-space.md -- McKnight Hardy's withholding-as-generative-force is the same mechanism Shearman identifies in comedy that refuses to explain; Dahl's "veil drawn over details" is negative space in comedic register
  • reader-complicity.md -- All three Part II essays converge on making the reader an active, implicated participant; Shearman's version works through laughter as the mechanism of complicity
  • short-story-form.md -- The short story's formal constraints (compression, no reset, callous abandonment of characters) make it the natural home for both comedic and uncanny effects; Shearman's magnifying-glass metaphor applies to both